I am currently working with superchick666 upon this story. I do not know if I should continue? I have a good outline, but do not know if people like it or not.
Chapter 1: Purgatorio Tina Turner was a five-foot tall farm girl. It was no surprise that she was not the
most popular girl at Carl Heights. Tina was a pretty girl with soft skin, a firm
stomach, and a butt you could bounce a coin off of.
As she walked into school, Tina made sure to crouch down. Maybe if she were
inconspicuous nobody would notice her. She couldnt have helped it, she thought as she walked down the hallway.
"I was just trying to get my bag," she groaned as the memory came bubbling up. There she was standing in the locker room as Caroline, the schools 6 ft. 3 inch athlete bitch was walking out of the shower. The two had collided and in a flash Caroline had hit the floor hard.
I thought jocks are supposed to be tough. She bemused herself as she saw Caroline on crutches and all the boys and girls checking on how she was.
Quickly Tina checked herself I just have to make it to class. She thought as she edged past Debra Messing and her boyfriend Tom Freckles Anderson.
Just as she got past the lovebirds awkward embrace she found herself face to bust.
Oh God, NO! Tina thought as she stared up in horror at the owner of this large bust. It was Cordy Chase, the schools most popular cheerleader. Standing at almost 510 tall with a pair of Double Ds, Cordy was the spitting image of Charisma Carpenter.
Unfortunately she also had Carpenters character off of Buffys attitude. Well, look who it is. She said smugly glaring at Tina with a evil grin.
If it isnt the Bitch that destroyed our teams chance of winning State. Cordy backed Tina against the locker and grinned. I would think you would have learned youre lesson since last time. Tina groaned out loud this time, she knew what was coming.
Cordy repeated the move that had been the subject of EVERY guys wet dreams since it happened yesterday. Slowly she moved forward, her spectacular bust engulfing Tinas head. It was extremely embarrassing as those twin cannons made her head disappear from sight. She was being publicly beaten by a pair of boobs!
Finally Colin Tyrell rushed forward and put a hand on Cordys arm. This was a mistake, since Cordy stood seven inches taller than Colins 53 frame. With one firm hand she grabbed Colin and slammed him into a locker. Cordy grinned and said, Why look, tiny Tina has a miniature boyfriend, this is just to good! Cordy was really beginning to get into her full stride but the bell, to pardon a cliché, saved them.
Fine, the beautiful cheerleader said finally allowing Tina to slump to the floor, Ive had my fun for today. Flicking her hair over her shoulder she strode off, her hips making their hypnotizing swaying motion.
Tina reached down trying to help Colin up.
You shouldnt have done that. She said angrily swinging her backpack over her shoulder.
WHY NOT! Colin shouted back wincing as he straitened up.
Because now she has you in her cross hairs, and I Tina was quiet I dont want you to get hurt.
Colin rolled his eyes and walked over, Tina, weve been friends since third grade. I think I am going to fight for you even if you dont like me like I like you.
Tina just turned around and said I wish I was taller, you know my desires, what Ive always wanted.
Colin did indeed. Under Tinas bed was every wonder woman and other book where a woman became an Amazon. Tina had always wanted to be dominating, to grow larger than everyone. She had used him, they hadnt every talked about that night since, to feel taller, to in some way live out that fantasy.
Colin stared down at his feet thinking about how not to do this. After a minute of staring at his feet, he shouted after Tina, Wait
Tina turned around with tears streaming down her red face, her beautiful face he groaned to himself.
I may Just know a way for you to get what you want End of Chapter 1
Chapter 2 Forests and trees I'm going to kill him. She thought as she picked her way through another series of branches. I'll thank him, than I am going to KILL him!
Unfortunately for Tina, she couldn't keep these pleasant uplifting thought in mind as she followed her best friend Colin Tyrell through the woods.
"Remind me why we can't use flashlights to find this place we're lookin' for" she asked him. Without turning around he replied, "because this isn't about common sense, this is about mysticism, religion, and..."
"A really old person that can make me bigger?" Tina asked. "And of course centuries of sacred belief boil down to making you bigger yes," he sighed wondering for the millionth time why he was doing this. Love, he thought, that or wild passionate sex. At this point Colin was beginning to wonder if either was worth it.
"Alright we're here" he said, coming to a stop in a clearing.
Tina looked around examining the clearing and seeing a small hut with smoke coming out of it. She watched as the smoke soared high into the night sky. Suddenly overcome with something other than irritation, she asked, "What do I do again?"
Colin smiled.
Five minutes later a completely nude Tina had overcome her wonder and was stumbling up the hill.
Yep, I really think I'm going to kill him this time. she thought as she heard him snickering behind her.
As she approached the doorway she yelled at the top of her lungs "I Tina Turner come here on a quest of self discovery. I wish to learn my inner most desire. I will take it from you if I must" Shivers ran up her spine, either from the cold, or from anger she wasn't quite sure.
Out of the doorway a wizened head popped out. "Oya, honey we've got us company." A voice shouted out from inside, "I stood in line for three hours to rent this porn, tell them to come back later." The women's face turned red and she disappeared inside. A loud crash sounded and a minute later her husband was outside with a flustered and pained look on his face. "I the great Ornulu greet you with open hand. I welcome you into my home and so on and so... ooof." he said as his wife elbowed him in the gut. "Come here dearie, yull catch a death cold naked." She glared at her husband until he averted his eyes.
Colin was sauntering up the hill now grinning, " hey mister Ornulu, how are the hedges?" he said grinning.
Ornulu shook his head, "Never get married Colin, first they change the furniture, then they alter your traditions you've been a caretaker to for millions of years."
As they stepped inside the cramped hut Ornulu looked at his wife, "You must leave, this is Tina's journey." She looked at him, then turned around and walked away. Ornulu looked at the smirking Colin. After a couple of seconds he took the hint and walked out himself.
Ornulu looked at Tina seriously for a moment. "I joke and I kid, this is no joke." A look came into his eyes, a red glaze that frightened Tina. "We came up with the phrase, be careful what you wish for. You wish to achieve what you want with no thought of the..."
Tina had had enough. "I walked through the woods in the middle of the night with no flashlight, stripped nude and yelled at the top of my lungs in the middle of nowhere." "Enough, either you're just another new age weirdo or you're the real deal."
Ornulu was madder then he had ever been, the insolence. Fine, let her have her fantasy and its subsequent nightmare.
Standing up he grabbed a piece of goop and handed it to her.
"What do I do with this?" She asked with a cautious tone
Ornulu smiled.
End chapter 2
Chapter 3: Visions of the future With a look of disgust, Tina dropped the green goo into her mouth.
BUM, BUM, BUM! drums banging in her ears as she felt her world spin.
Slowly Ornlu began to moan in rhythm. Darkness was creeping in around upon her.
BUM, BUM, BUM! more darkness, and though she couldn't see it, her eyes were turning violet.
Slowly Ornlu knelt down, "Embrace eternity!" he yelled and then her world was color
Images flashed by faster then she could see. She saw humongous body parts. Colin crying as he held a gun. Cordelia with a smug grin on her face. Troy Falco, the towns mayor, staring in horror. more images flooded into her mind
"For every action there is an equal and different reaction." a loud deep voice proclaimed
"All magic has a cost."
"Look to the sky's, for help comes from on high!"
"Choose and act, and don't look Back"
All these words flowed in and out of her mind as the drum beats began to slow down and the visions faded.
"That's it" she cried angry.
That is when she felt a deep movement underneath her skin. Her body felt like it was on fire. The drums started up again. Her eyes flashed purple and she moaned as she felt the most erotic thing in her life. Her body expanding right before her eyes.
She reached down and grabbed one of her breast in her hand. They continued to expand, overflowing her hands her legs lengthened turning the knee length skirt into a mini. She felt her shoulders press against the shirt tightly. finally it all slowed and Tina opened her eyes and said. "Finally, we get to the good part." End of chapter three
Chapter 4: The morning after Tina groaned as she rolled around, feeling her tender breasts rub against the sheets.
What? She thought dreamily, the sands of dreams still in her eyes.
She gazed down and beheld her body. That was it, HER BODY, she thought.
It had been a dream, she had thought as she shuffled her large bubbly rear down the
grey sheets of her bed to her mirror.
No ****in way. She screamed as she laid her eyes upon her improved figure.
Standing in the starkness of her room was a figure that could not have been Tina Turner
Her long graceful neck fell down as her eyes scanned her increased bustline
Before her breasts had been small, like tennis balls, now they stretched outward, Having ballooned beyond those small pathetic bras in her dresser.
Reaching down with two long, graceful arms; Tina grabed her tits and cooed Quietly. So much bigger!.
Quickly she scissor on her legs over to her dresser, Previously Tina had to go up on her tip toes to grab something off of the top. Now though, she was standing on bare feet. My legs, she thought sooooo long?
They were each stretching downward, not yet stately redwoods, but still Supple and growing.
Dont worry, she thought as she pulled the locket off of her dresser, Im going to get a lot bigger baby, this is only the beginning. She thought this as she clasped the locket, seeing how it accentuated her bustline.
End of Chapter 4
Chapter 5 The Middleton Racoons, the most hideous mascot in the state, limbered up to play football, an inconspicuous truck pulled up. White when it was first built, the truck showed its age with countless scores and a sheen of grey. Dirt caked the vehicle. Out of this vehicle, however, stepped a most magnificent woman. Wearing clothing which was at least two sizes less than what she should, she bounced her way to the ticket window.
Gary Randolph was bored. Boredom more or less being his state of mind when doing anything involving work. He was having to miss the game, all because he allegedly put a stack of condoms in Mrs. Conners desk. "Screw School Spirit," He said when asked to do this, but that did not fly. At this time his thoughts drifted to the Coons. In the state the Coons were 11-1.
Gary shook his head as he saw the most lovely image before him. Her hips swayed mesmerizing him. So transfixed was Gary that he didn't even notice that this creature was addressing him. "Excuse me Gary, but I think I would not mind some tickets now."
Gary found his eyes elavating upward from her legs to a decent pair contained within a too small t-shirt that screened the Hulk saying " Do not make me angry." Gary found himself looking Eye to hair with the luscious Tina Turner. "What, He thought, " I have stalked every woman at school, i know every rack intimately, and this is not one of them." He looked down into Tina's hazel eyes. "Um, sure, right Tina, hey you look great!"
She smiled slightly and said, "Why Gary, you noticed." She gyrated her hips a little and said, "I just got so tired of not having any curves so I wished real HARD and they came." Still smiling she whipped around and said, "but you know, curves need a good ass, and me, I like my new ass, It is just round but HARD!"
She slapped her ass and gary felt like he was not goin to make it. Tina stood up, grinned and asked " So about that ticket?"
Gary was just ready to take his restroom break, whipped out her ticket and ran off.
end of chapter 5
Chapter six
Tina was still laughing. Gary was a moron, he had once made fun of her. "And the Lord said 'vengeance is mine..." she thought with a sly grin.
Tina sashayed up the steps, she had measured herself back home, she had grown five inches into a five foot eight goddess. Her inseam had gotten LONG. She had tried on her jeans but they were all slightly short. Instead she had put on a pair of sweats which stretched tight across her rear, and were tight all over. She also had own her favorite Hulk shirt. She smiled as she felt how tight every thing was. "And this is only the beginning she grinned.
Up ahead of her she so Collin and she waved with a stupid grin on her face.
Collin noticed her and winced, this was bad.
Out of nowhere a fist sent her flying into the stairs.
Cordelia Chase and two other cheerleaders stepped up to her.
"Oh crap, He said standing up running down to help his friend.
Cordelia gazed smugly at the dazed Tina.
Tina looked up angry and launched at her.
Cordy at this point realized something was wrong, "She seems, thicker...."
Collin made it at the exact moment that Cordy was thrown back into her friends.
Cordelia looked up and then laughed, "Ha, it looks like Tina's been eating right." Cordy walked up and shoved her saying, "You might have grown, but your still Tiny Tina to me."
Tina wiped some blood out from under her nose, "You want to test that theory Cor, hit me again"
Cordelia looked at her, her gang looked at Cordelia, Colin was trying to keep in between them both.
"Fine, not so good news for Colin, the only girl little enough to date him is too big for him now, HA HA HE!" Cordy laughed, causing everybody in the area to look at Colin, who just stood there and took it.
OOOH that BITCH!" Tina thought silently, this is in no way over. As she thought this a warm feeling spread all inside her!
end of chapter 6
Tina Turner Chapter 7 Colin Tyrell was weaving to and fro attempting to catch the leggy Tina as she made her way through the throng of students.
"Bitch," Tina thought, "I'll show her!"
Tina halted, catching her breath as the night sky twinkled above. BANG!
Tina felt a collision into her body, turned around and stared at the rather diminutive form of Colin.
"Oh my, I am sooooo sorry." she said reaching down to get him to his feet.
Collin was wincing as he glanced up at her, " thats one large bumper."
Tina mockingly shifted a hip and glared at him, "As if you would know little fellow."
Tina felt a thrill rush through her, quickly she dampened it. Collin was her friend, she knew that even friendships had there limits.
"Anyway this bumper is heading out, I've gotta big show to make happen. She winked at Collin as she sashayed away
Collin groaned
Chapter 8
Tina walked into the "after game get together" and was immediately a hit.
Fred thompson was the teams second string quarterback. He had a goal, to sleep with one girl a day, every night, until the season ended.
to add a further wrinkle, he said he would not sleep with the same woman twice.
Needless to say ol' Freddy was out with it, he turned around to see two women. One was the voluptuous Cordelia Chase, the other was slightly smaller Tina.
"What do you want Cordy?" shouted Tina as she stopped moving with the beat.
Cordelia ****ed her hips, a grin on her face.
She reached inside her red dress, and pulled out two large breasts, "some people here think that I cannot still embarrass you with my boobs, but you are still just
little Tina, so here it is." She reached over and poured beer on Tina's hulk shirt. "If I win our little grudge match, I get to choose what you wear tomorrow."
Tina looked up into Cordy's eyes.
"And if I win?" she asked
Cordelia leaned in and whispered in Tina's ears.
"I am in!" she said.
Tina pulled her assets out as all the girls around the room where thinking the same things, "way to set us all back by about fifty years girls."
Chapter Nine
She watched as Cordelia's chest approached her, their skin touched. It felt, good!
WTF, good, she thought, hell no!
Tina thought everything she could to turn herself off, baseball, willow off of the Buffy show, anything and everything to turn her off.
Tina gasped as she felt cold beer being poured on her as Cordelia pulled away grinning. It was like a baptism, a baptism of faliure. The guys had poured the
drink on her, the one who lost!
Cordelia grinned, "Well I guess I've still got it." As Cordelia was Laughing a fly flew into her mouth. "Stupid fly," she said as she spat it, "c'mon lets go."
Tina felt miserable ten inches of growth and she was n't tall enough.
Chapter ten
Freddy walked foward, put his hand on Tina's shoulders, "Hey, babe, it is cool, Cord's a bitch." He helped her up
"C'mon, want to go take a leak on her car?" he smilled at her.
"Freddy, you had me at wiz" she said grinning. Chapter ten TIna stumbled into Freddy's room giggling like crazy.
Tina felt Freddy run into her making them both fall on the bed. She could feel him paw at her clothes as she clawed at his.
Morning after "NNNGH, I think I have the world's biggest hangover." Tina groaned.
She rolled out of the strange bed and began puking like crazy. "HUUHH
Freddy, who had far more experience, walked outside seeing if there was any coffee.
Tina reached down to grab her clothes, noticed something.
"FREDDDYYYYY!" she yelled hopping up and down.
"What, He shouted as he ran into the room to find
Tina grinning down at him, all six feet of him!
Superchick's parts, mine coming soon
Chapter 11 Tina grows up
Freddy was finding himself staring face tochin, yeah it is not the most exciting position to be in, but hey our heroine is still a growing girl.
Tina smiled as she circled her arms around Fred and pulled him closer hey fellow, Im still here she said with a grin
Fred stared up into her twinkling eyes as she leaned in forcing her tongue into his mouth.
Tina grinned as she gripped his hair, Freddy had the greatest hair she thought silently.
Tina looked over at the alarm, 9:00, ****!
Got to go, nice sex, um real special, she said runnin out the door.
Fred just stood there for a second and then said , so youll contact me, right?
Chapter twelve The night before
Tina was in bliss.Fred was a fukin magician.As she allowed herself to slumber into bliss.
TINA TURNER
What? she asked dreamily
YOU ARE IN GREAT DANGER YOU MUST NOT GROW ANY MORE
Yeah righttttt, look this is my dream and I am getting really bored
Tina began walking
YOU MUST NOT CONTINUE, SOME DOORS SHOULD STAY CLOSED!
Tina sighed Look, what are you, a ****in fortune, I LIKE being BIG.
She turned over but found herself trapped underneath a weight.
IF YOU WILL NOT COMPLY, WE WILL STOP YOU!
I have had ENOUGH! Tina screamed feeling strength surge
Tina began to sweat.Bigger, stronger, and cooler. She groaned
Tinas torso stretched in her dreams several feet while in her body
She stretched several inches longer. Tina now thirty feet in her
Mind grinned as she ran her hands down her massive thighs,her
Engorged chest bouncing with each move.
NOW THIS IS MORE LIKE IT, AND AS FOR YOU MR. OMNISCIENT
VOICE THINGIE.Tina turned around gave her middle finger a wag,
And said STICK YOUR OMNIESCIENCE WHERE YOU UM, WOULD
DO THAT.
Back in her body Tina Turner moaned as her breast raised and
Stayed at their current level, getting larger and rounder with
Each breath.Her legs moved down revealing her ankles under the
Sheets.She had just grown a great deal.
End of Part 1
Part 2
Going Up in the world Tina Turners big year
Tina rushed into her room chucking her bag into the corner with a wumpf.
Hunn, I cant believe he didnt notice how big I just got. She thought as she leaned back.
Tina walked over to her old green bedroom wall toward the mark she had made after her last change.
The black mark on the wall was almost out of sight, she thought, as her face craned down to look at it.
Ive grown twice fast, she thought.Once after the old man, and once last evening.
Tina felt a wild grin go on her face, she turned around to the tape measure.
A chill swept through her spine as she felt her nipples harden.
63.
I tower over Cordelia Chase, She thought silently grinning as she ran a hand down one large tit, easily beginning to pass the E mark.
You know what they say on revenge, Tina thought silently
Tina reached into her closet and put on her red dress, the one that had fit her old frame snug.
Tina turned around and grinned as she put a fist on one hip staring at her reflection.
A 63 Amazon with impossibly long legs looking back.Her tanned cleavage was clearly showing, creating a major distraction.Finally after applying makeup to her large gentle lips, Tina put on her three inch, hot red heels bringing her height up to 63 and some.
The over 65 bombshell ****ed a hip, grinning finished her earlier thoughts, They say Im a.
Chapter 2
Tina walked into her school and everything was different..
Tinas day started in Home room
While there Fred Thompson was staring, he had clearly been saying something to his friends.
Hey there Freddy, she grinned waving causing a hypnotizing display of clevage.
Fred was dumbstruck for ten seconds while she just grinned at him.
When someone says hi, she said, you typically say hello with a wicked smile
Freddy shook his head and said, Sorry Tina, I just was in awe of you, I cannot believe how lucky I am.
Tina closed her eyes, God no! she thought, It was just sex
Im just happy to be dating the most gorgeous girl in school, he said.
Great, she thought, hes a clinger.
Freddy, it was a one night stand, it was sweet but that was all it was.She said, hey look home room is starting, look I hope we can be friends, maybe who knows, see ya.
The guys were all looking at her with new eyes, while Freddy was calling back to her.
Tina shrugged, he was hardly mister commitment, and anyways by bringing him off his high horse, she had just sent her own horse through the roof.What a horrible analogy. Ow.
Sorry, sorryTINA!
Tina felt herself laugh uncontrollably.Colin, I know my boobs are awesome but God, you could not even buy me a dinkshe said
Colin meanwhile found himself face to bust to his incredible friend.Tina, wuh wuh wuh.
Tina leaned forward grinning, shut up or put up little guy.
Tina saw him staring into her cleavage and decided to give him a show as she moved in and hugged him to her.
Colin felt her two warm breasts squeezing into his head, but instead of just being embarrassing he could feel his thing rising.
Tina grinned as she felt a welcome warm tingle run through, she was so hot right now she knew she would have to put Colin down soon.
Tina dropped Colin and whispered into his ear, I hope to see you continue after me little one.She straightened up and winked as she sauntered down the hall way, two large firm bulges moving in the time of her motions.
comments?
-- Edited by superman on Friday 20th of March 2009 09:02:59 PM
-- Edited by superman on Thursday 16th of April 2009 10:58:48 PM
-- Edited by superman on Saturday 18th of April 2009 12:27:24 AM
-- Edited by superman on Monday 4th of May 2009 12:38:00 AM
It's just something that stood out to me. Most people try and avoid famous names, it helps make the character feel unique. It would also help if there were "quotation marks" around the dialogue. I found it a little confusing at times.
Other than that, I really like the content and think this story has potential. Please continue if you wish to.
I am thinking about the length of the story. I want it long, my friend wants it short. Fortunately we both managed to agree on at least 23 chapters. We had some creative differences but we've come to an understanding.
I also loved that part when Cordy engulfed Tina's head with her breasts. I would be great if Tina got bigger and did the same thing to Cordy and forced her to milk her.