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New Story! Teddy Bear Ted by Beetlebomb


As usual, you guys, I found it too difficult to hide my recent writings from you. SO, I present to you Part 1 of my new story: Teddy Bear Ted.

Enjoy, and don't forget to leave a comment! please :)

P.s. I appologize for the lack of "s and other such things. For some reason the program is use(Open Office) makes this forum not detect them when pasting it over. If someone knows a solution to this, that would be very helpful ^^. Thank you.

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Teddy Bear Ted

By Beetlebomb

 

 

Part 1


Every single day that I look back on it I can't help but regret some of the things that I've allowed myself to do. Life was never meant to be lived like this, not for anybody, but now that it has taken affect, mankind must live with the consequences.

 

It all started a few months back when a new shipment of drugs came into my office one morning. I was moving one of the containers into my cabinet when I noticed a watery substance on my hands. It stung slightly, so I quickly went to go wash it out, but before I could the strange red liquid was gone. I felt no immediate pain or reaction, so I continued on with my day with no further concerns.

 

It wasn't until I got home that evening that I began to feel the effects of whatever was on my hand. Before I could close the door I was immediately overwhelmed with severe dizziness. I told my wife what had happened and, after some scolding and ranting about how stupid I could be, she drove me to her doctor.

 

Stephanie Shermin was an exceptional young doctor; I always did approve of her work. She graduated top in her class. It was one of the main reasons why I suggested her to Lilly. I tried being my wifes doctor for a short time, but during her check-ups our conversations seemed to only revolve around at-home problems rather then her health.

 

And Stephanie was a very bright girl, don't get me wrong, but something definitely told me her looks helped get her more then good grades. She had long blond hair with a very wholesome bust; the type of chest that could lure any mans wandering eyes with the flick of her hair. And her blue eyes, more like light bluebut gorgeous none-the-less. Her appearance always did make me stare, and I think Lilly knew, but she never said anything. I mean, that's what us guys do, right?

 

I had no reason to stare anyways. Lilly was a beautiful woman herself, and I was very lucky to have her as my wife. I can still recall the day I heard about her. We were in high school and my friend Freddy came up to me commenting on the new girl in school. He said she had baby feeders bigger then your head and hips that could knock you off your feet. I never could forget that line. Freddy, my best friend, still comments on her to this day about her overly healthy chest and her wonderfully tall five foot eight frame. To me she really was the perfect package.

 

If you would please take a seat right over there, Mr. Carter. Dr.Shermin pointed at the cushioned counter next to me. I just need to check your vitals. You know the drill. I nodded in approval.

 

She prodded my entire body, including my hearing and eyesight. It wasn't long before she commented on my good health. Well, Mr.Carter, you seem as healthy as an ox. I don't know what else to tell you. Get some rest and I'm sure you'll be feeling better by morning. We exchanged our thanks and headed out the door.

 

Contrary to what Dr.Shermin said, my headaches continued, and I stayed in bed for most of the day. I felt weak, like all the energy in my body has been drained. I would wake up in the middle of the night, forgetting where I was for a moment, before laying my head back down and falling asleep. The warmth of my wifes body next to me and the soft sound of her breathing helped ease the thumping in my head.

 

When I got up the next morning for work I felt a lot better. It was as if that old jump to my step had returned and I was quickly out of the shower and on my feet, getting dressed. It was when I was putting on my jeans that I noticed I didn't have to struggle as much to close the button. I figured I lost some weight from being sick. Lucky me, I thought. Little did I know that my shoes also had some extra space to them as well. I was never able to wiggle my toes in my shoes before. Honey! Get out of bed! Breakfast is ready! I heard my wife yell up at me from the kitchen.

 

I was greeted with her soft fresh face smiling up at me. I made you your favorite. Her big green eyes glistened I'm so glad you're up already. I was beginning to think you would never get better!

 

Lilly was wearing a yellow and green uniform, already preparing for work like myself. She had a job during the weekdays at a nearby restaurant called Chads. Although my income as a doctor had always been more then enough to keep the house together, she insisted on having a job. She told me it helped her feel more alive.

 

I sat down at the dining room table and joined her. I couldn't help but take notice of her long smooth legs next to me. The uniforms skirt really helped accentuate them. I always knew I was breast man, but her legs could not be ignored.

 

Bacon's great, honey I said, complimenting her work. Is it? I think I might have made too much. Oh no no no. You made just enough I replied, grabbing a couple more 'healthy' pieces. Thoughts of my recent weight loss encouraging my second serving.

 

 

 

Work that day was bad, at best. My body was still feeling the effects of being sick, and I had practically no energy for the majority of the day. I kicked my shoes off and let myself fall onto the couch, face first.

 

Lilly heard the door shut and came downstairs Oh Ted...have another hard day at work? her voice trailed. I replied with a NNNnhnnhnnnn, my face still in the couch.

 

It turned out that she had just gotten home before me and was still in her uniform. The light in the house was dimly lit and something clicked in me. I could sense it in her too.

 

Need some help getting that heavy jacket off of you, hun?her voice hinting with lust. I could feel her warm presence above me as she slipped her hands over my shoulders and peeled my heavy overcoat off. Oh, Ted. You must have been working Sooo hard today. She continued, taking off my jacket now. I turned around, still laying on the couch, but looking up into her eyes. She had already pulled off her shirt when I wasn't looking and her large chest hung just above me by a dark green-laced bra. She climbed over the couch and let herself rub against me. Her pussy pressed into my crotch as she tried to stimulate me further. unnhhh.. A moan escaped my mouth as she continued her seduction.

 

Her legs intertwined with mine as she began to kiss me passionately. Oh god Ted! My big strong man! Give me all you got! Hearing those words coming from my wife immediately began to stiffen my member. I don't know if she could feel it, but we continued on with our love-making. By now only my jeans were left and her undies. I felt butterflies flow through my stomach and up into my chest. I grabbed onto her bra strap and tugged on it hard. Her huge breasts were released and as soon as they came into my field of vision I used one of my hands to turn her back towards me and I began to passionately grope all over her moist body. I squeezed and tugged on her incredibly soft breasts with one hand as I rubbed her stomach and waist with the other. Ohhhhh TED!!!!!!!! she screamed in ecstasy. I could feel my erection harden further into her rear.

 

She reached her hand down and began to rub it through the material. I grabbed onto her shoulders once again and positioned her so that she could face me. I was in so much control. My slow involuntary thrusts caused her breasts to bounce up and down slowly, making her nipples erect.

 

Oooh, is this for me? She chirped, pulling down my pants. Looks delicious! she slid down my waist and positioned herself just below me. I had my eyes closed, and all I could hear was her soft panting, then a pause; followed by her warm wet lips trying to encircle and take in my entire member. Soft moans escaped her mouth as she kept trying to push herself deeper. Her beautiful narrow chin combined with her bright green eyes just pushed me further to climax. I could feel those breasts squashing against my thighs.

 

Nnn, Lil'-- I- I'm gonna!! I tried to form a complete sentence, but the sight of her head bobbing up and down between my legs was too much. She looked up at me and nodded, signaling she was ok with it. I didn't hold on for much longer before exploding every last drop of my juices into her mouth. I saw her eyes flinch as the first burst surprised her slightly. Never-the-less she took it all. She continued to suck harder and harder, and then finally with a *pop* she let go of me.

 

Ahhhh.. she sighed. Her long brunette hair was all mangled up, but still her whole body remained beautiful in my eyes. We both fell limp and began to fall asleep. Her warm naked body still laying on top of me...


to be continued...



-- Edited by Beetlebomb at 07:13, 2008-11-13

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wow amazing~~ xd

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Good slow shrink story Bettlebomb!

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It's just a taste, for now. I plan on making this relatively long. There will be slow growth-mini giantess though, of course.

I'm glad you three enjoyed it :)

-Beetlebomb

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Shrinking's not really my thing, but so long as there's growth, I'm happy. By the way, I think because people don't need to sign in to view this, a lot won't comment as they won't have an account. If you HAD to sign in to view stories people may feel more obliged to make use of their account. Also, a very small percentage of any forum will actually post comments, most are lurkers or don't feel compelled to post and this site has a fairly small following to start with.

As for your quotation marks problem, I haven't heard of 'Open Office'. You could try and get any version of Microsoft Word, or even use notepad. Quotation marks copy over fine from them.

Keep up the good work, as always. However, it would be nice if you gave us more of an idea about the heights of the characters. I know one of them is 5'8'', but I have no idea about the others. The main character could be the same size as his wife, a couple of inches taller or maybe looms half a foot over her. It doesn't even need to be a precise measurement of feet and inches, but at least give us an idea of their size in relation to the other characters (e.g. eye level, shoulder level, or nose level etc.) It's quite important in this genre for us to be all aware of the contrast in heights between the characters. It may be clear in your mind but remember we are completely in the dark.

It's just something that stood out to me is all :P. Anyway, keep on contributing, you're about the closest thing to exclusive content this site's got! It's also nice to see you writing longer stories, with slow growth it's always best to take your time.

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rodgerm25 wrote:

Shrinking's not really my thing, but so long as there's growth, I'm happy. By the way, I think because people don't need to sign in to view this, a lot won't comment as they won't have an account. If you HAD to sign in to view stories people may feel more obliged to make use of their account. Also, a very small percentage of any forum will actually post comments, most are lurkers or don't feel compelled to post and this site has a fairly small following to start with.

As for your quotation marks problem, I haven't heard of 'Open Office'. You could try and get any version of Microsoft Word, or even use notepad. Quotation marks copy over fine from them.

Keep up the good work, as always. However, it would be nice if you gave us more of an idea about the heights of the characters. I know one of them is 5'8'', but I have no idea about the others. The main character could be the same size as his wife, a couple of inches taller or maybe looms half a foot over her. It doesn't even need to be a precise measurement of feet and inches, but at least give us an idea of their size in relation to the other characters (e.g. eye level, shoulder level, or nose level etc.) It's quite important in this genre for us to be all aware of the contrast in heights between the characters. It may be clear in your mind but remember we are completely in the dark.

It's just something that stood out to me is all :P. Anyway, keep on contributing, you're about the closest thing to exclusive content this site's got! It's also nice to see you writing longer stories, with slow growth it's always best to take your time.




 I'm not too worried about those that choose not to comment or make an account. I know that the few that do, care about this site and want to see it grow.

I do apologize for including SM in this story though. I've received a couple of comments from not only you through PMs saying that they're a bit disappointed in me including it, but what is done is done.

As for height comparison, this is just the tip of the iceberg, and I gaurentee you that there will be more of it soon. I did, however, give the reader several situations where it shows that Ted's at least a head taller then Lilly. It may be vague as of now, but I was kind of leaning towards letting my readers imagine to themselves what they prefered the situation to be. It's more of a loose guideline. I believe letting your mind mold the characters slightly while you read can be a positive thing in an erotic story.

It's scattered, but I've included that Lilly is a brunette that is 5 foot 8 inches, with green eyes, nice lean legs, and a cheerful attitude. As for Ted, I let him be more vague because I want the readers to imagine themselves in his shoes, almost as if that was them.

And, of course, I will continue to contribute to the forums. There's nothing more that I enjoy then to express some of my deepest dreams through writing.

Even though we may not have many writers, it's growing; and that's good enough for me.

Thank you for taking the time to write such a 'wholesome' comment ^^,

Beetlebomb



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yeah, i have to agree beet-man, i like it better when the hieght of the guy is kept hush-hush. makes it easier to put myself in his shoes.

i agree with rodgerm though in that i'm not really down with SM stories. i'll still read them, and enjoy them...it's just....does anyone else find it a little queer being shrunk? i don't mind her being taller than me if she's just growing, but when i become useless from shrinkining in the rest of the world (e.g. i can't use the t.v. remote and my pants don't fit) , it just makes the fantasy awkward. i probibly shouldn't say this and ruin others fantasy, but...what if another dude walked in while i was shrunk, awww...i think i'd puke.

anyone see what i'm trying to get across here?

and by-the-by, beet-man your story's is great and got potenitial. don't mind me amd my quirk. one of the reasons it's got potential is becasue it's not one of those story's that just jumps into the giantess gendre, your taking your time and useing a good amount of development. some storeis on the other hand just take FOREVER and are a big tease. so kudos for that.



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Beetlebomb wrote:

 Thank you for taking the time to write such a 'wholesome' comment ^^,

 



Thanks biggrin. I like to give my comments some 'substance'. I find it a bit more constructive than the usual one-sentence-appraisal. Saying "I like it" is encouraging to the writer, but I doubt it helps them improve. I think it also shows consideration for the writer, not just their stories.





-- Edited by rodgerm25 at 01:31, 2008-11-15

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Beetlebomb wrote:

P.s. I appologize for the lack of "s and other such things. For some reason the program is use(Open Office) makes this forum not detect them when pasting it over. If someone knows a solution to this, that would be very helpful ^^. Thank you.

 





If I had to guess, I'd say you're having trouble copying quotes over because you have OpenOffice set to automatically replace the regular unformatted quotes (the one's that are just straight lines, like the one's you used in the sentence I just quoted) with custom quotes (the one's that "curl"). OpenOffice does this by default. To change it, go to Tools >> AutoCorrect, and under the Custom Quotes tab, uncheck the "Replace" box under "Double Quotes". The box under "Single Quotes" should already be unchecked (by default), which is why all your apostrophes copied over correctly.

If that is the reason for this problem, then it stands to reason that the same thing would happen for anyone who uses Microsoft Word, because Word does the exact same thing, except Word does it with both the double and single quotes.

At any rate, I'm looking forward to more of this story. Judging by the tags you applied to the thread, it seems like it would be right up my alley.

 

EDIT: Unfortunately, adjusting the AutoCorrect settings won't change what you already typed, so if you want to fix what you posted, you have to go through it and fix all the quotes one at a time.



-- Edited by JackVigilante at 20:38, 2008-11-15

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JackVigilante wrote:

 

Beetlebomb wrote:

P.s. I appologize for the lack of "s and other such things. For some reason the program is use(Open Office) makes this forum not detect them when pasting it over. If someone knows a solution to this, that would be very helpful ^^. Thank you.

 





If I had to guess, I'd say you're having trouble copying quotes over because you have OpenOffice set to automatically replace the regular unformatted quotes (the one's that are just straight lines, like the one's you used in the sentence I just quoted) with custom quotes (the one's that "curl"). OpenOffice does this by default. To change it, go to Tools >> AutoCorrect, and under the Custom Quotes tab, uncheck the "Replace" box under "Double Quotes". The box under "Single Quotes" should already be unchecked (by default), which is why all your apostrophes copied over correctly.

If that is the reason for this problem, then it stands to reason that the same thing would happen for anyone who uses Microsoft Word, because Word does the exact same thing, except Word does it with both the double and single quotes.

At any rate, I'm looking forward to more of this story. Judging by the tags you applied to the thread, it seems like it would be right up my alley.

 

EDIT: Unfortunately, adjusting the AutoCorrect settings won't change what you already typed, so if you want to fix what you posted, you have to go through it and fix all the quotes one at a time.



-- Edited by JackVigilante at 20:38, 2008-11-15

 



Thank you very much, Jack, for the very useful information.

And grats on your first post :P

Welcome to the boards, although I'm sure you've been here for a good amount of time--so i'll say the mumbo jumbo.

-Beetlebomb

 



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Glad to see some new content up here!
I hope this board picks up soon!

As for the story beetle,
Great start! I always enjoy reading your work, and a longer story by you only means a better one ;)

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